Audience Evaluation-Class Disscusion

Today in class we all watched each others final drafts before giving verbal feedback. Below is the response that mine and Emily's thriller opening sequence received.

Positive Feedback:

• Really good ambient sounds that creates tension
• the black and white created mystery because it creates an atmosphere change
• Slow build of tension
• Creates enigma with the dragging of the bag and the mysterious nature of the male antagonist
• The production title fills its function and is good 
• The eye at the end of the sequence creates an enigma around the mans identity

Things that need improving:

• The addition of ambient and diegetic sounds would improve the quality of the opening sequence
• Some of the shots are too long so there isn't much drama, these need to be shortened or there needs to be more action within them.